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How Zombies Make Your Writing Active

August 14, 2014 by Kenna Griffin

active voiceI’ve written here before about the importance of writing in active voice. Simply, active voice makes your writing strong and more concise. This typically means writing in subject, verb, object format.

I loved this little quip, originally introduced to me by a former editor-in-chief.

If you can add “by zombies” to the end of a sentence, you are writing in passive voice.

Think about it.

She was eaten by zombies.

Zombies ate her.

You clearly can see the difference.

I encourage you to use zombies to make your writing more active. Read each sentence and make sure you’re not leaving room for zombies. I don’t think any of us want that!

 

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